“FRIEND, YOU’RE TALKING TO
A GUY WITH A PRICE ON HIS HEAD
AND THE POLICE AT HIS BACK…”Compared to the $40 million the cops think he stole, seventy-five thousand dollars may not sound like much. But it’s all the money in the world to the struggling Cuban exiles of Miami who rescued Morgan the Raider. So when it’s snatched by a man the Cubans trusted, Morgan sets out to get it back. A simple favor – but as the bodies pile up…dead men and beautiful women…the Raider wonders what kind of Latin hell he’s gotten himself into. And just who or what is the mysterious…
Consummata?
The Consummata is the posthumous sequel to Mickey Spillane’s The Delta Factor, completed, like several other Spillane works, by his chosen trustee Max Allan Collins. According to Collin’s note, “After a disappointing experience producing a Factor film, however, the frustrated Spillane set aside the already announced second Morgan novel, The Consummata.”
I really enjoyed The Delta Factor, and with the combo of a great title, a great cover, and the Hard Case Crime imprimatur, I was looking forward to a ripping read with The Consummata.
Unfortunately, the book doesn’t work. In addition to the frustration with the film project, it’s likely Spillane put down The Consummata because the darn thing just wasn’t going anywhere, much less in a direction that would warrant both being a followup to The Delta Factor and having such an awesome title. The Delta Factor had a variety of intrigues and a fairly epic scope. The intrigues in The Consummata aren’t nearly as interesting, it’s substantially less thrilling, and its scope is relatively tiny.
Compounding these problems is that this Morgan the Raider doesn’t seem a whole lot like the Morgan the Raider I met and liked in The Delta Factor. One of Factor‘s more interesting aspects was that the book was first-person, but Morgan remained mysterious and semi-mythic to the people who interacted with him and to the reader. In The Consummata, rather than being somewhat mysterious, everyone seems to know Morgan to the point where they all call him “Morg,” like he’s a drinking buddy rather than a living legend. I felt like I was reading about a different character who happened to have a similar skill set. I don’t know if that’s the fault of Spillane, Collins, or both, but it was unsettling and disappointing. (At least one scene, a sex scene pretty obviously added by Collins to spice things up, is completely out of character given what it could have cost Morgan. An important aspect of Morgan the Raider in The Delta Factor was his ability to maintain control in situations where gorgeous women were throwing themselves at him, despite his constant horniness.)
Collins tries to inject some excitement into the book by adding subplots, but the results seem forced. I didn’t like most aspects of Collins’ ending, either, but, to be fair, I don’t think he had a whole lot to work with to get him to that point.
All of which is too darn bad. Had The Consummata ended up being both a good book and a book about the Morgan the Raider from The Delta Factor, perhaps there would have been enough interest for Collins to take a stab at extending the series. As it stands, The Consummata and Morgan the Raider both reach their end set up for further adventures that will almost certainly never happen.
Update: Author Brian Drake, who comments here semi-regularly, likes The Consummata quite a bit more than I do. Here’s his take.
Posts in this series
Review: The Delta Factor by Mickey Spillane
Review: The Consummata by Mickey Spillane and Max Allan Collins (this post)
Movie review: The Delta Factor (1970)
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When has there ever been a really worthwhile book that was left half-completed by an author at his death and finished by someone else? August Derleth’s (and others) completions of Lovecraft fragments are pale shadows of the real thing. Robert B. Parker’s completion of Chandler’s “The Poodle Springs Story” was dreadful. Everything you love about an author tends to be missing, or at best unconvincingly faked, when someone else comes in posthumously to finish up what may have seemed like a promising start to a story.
I make a point of not responding to negative reviews unless they strike me as unfair and/or inaccurate. Everybody’s got a right to an opinion on a novel and I have no argument with that. Reading a novel is a collaborative affair — me plus the reader. Sometimes it’s not a good fit.
But I do take exception to the assumptions made about who wrote what, and so on. That I, for example, supposedly contributed subplots “which seemed forced.” You don’t know what I added or didn’t add. I don’t think it’s asking too much for the novel to be taken on its own terms and not subjected to this guesswork, educated or not.
This brings me to Craig’s comment, which also falls into the unfair category. Judge my book because you like it or not, but don’t dismiss it — without reading it — because Robert B. Parker did a lousy job on POODLE SPRINGS.
Most of the response to my collaborations with Mickey has been very positive. I never figure to please everybody, but it was my honor to have Mickey himself, in the last week of his life, ask me to take on these collaborations. There were six substantial Mike Hammer manuscripts, all in the 25,000 to 30,000 word length, often with plot breakdowns and character notes. That hardly compares to the small manuscript Parker worked with on POODLE SPRINGS, and I guess we all know Chandler didn’t ask Bob to complete it for him. Mickey’s very famous character, Mike Hammer, appeared in a scant thirteen novels published during Mickey’s lifetime. That I had the opportunity, with Mickey’s blessing, to add six more to the canon all with substantial Spillane content was/is a responsibility and thrill. I felt much the same about THE CONSUMMATA, because it represented the only other Morgan novel. This May, the second Mike Hammer novel, LADY, GO DIE! — begun in 1945 shortly after I, THE JURY was completed — will be published by Titan, the first of the final three substantial Hammers.
These are collaborations. I extend and shape the material — usually 100 to 125 double-spaced pages — to meet a length of around 300 such pages. I don’t just pick up where Mickey left off. It’s a blending of the two writers, and Spillane material appears deep into the book, well past the half-way mark. And again, sometimes he’s at least roughly outlined the rest.
Part of my method is to never add sub-plots that weren’t set up by Mickey, nor do I introduce new characters not found in Mickey’s substantial manuscript. THE CONSUMMATA does contain one of the most extreme examples of this process — there was no explanation for who or what the Consummata was. I used the s & m fetish of the chief bad guy to come up with my vision of who (not what) the Consummata might be, beyond just an evocative title for a novel. The final s & m sequence drew up on similar scenes in THE BODY LOVERS and several Spillane novellas. It seemed to be where he was heading. But there is not one character, or plot thread, in the novel that Mickey didn’t create or put in motion.
I believe this to be a unique situation in mystery fiction — that this much material existed for the first writer’s chosen collaborator to deal with. Though you imagine (with no basis other than speculation, however confidently and glibly you might express it) that Spillane set aside THE CONSUMMATA because he was displeased with it. There were many factors contributing to the unusual number of substantial unfinished manuscripts in Mickey’s files, perhaps the most significant being his relationship with the Jehovah’s Witnesses. He was forced out of the church several times because his published work was considered too racy and violent. Many of these manuscripts end at such a moment — in THE BIG BANG, the final thing in the manuscript was a very graphic sex scene (which more than one reviewer like you assumed I had written). THE DELTA FACTOR was written just before his most graphically sexual Mike Hammer, SURVIVAL…ZERO! and his sexually explicit THE ERECTION SET. Mickey was out of the church at the time, which would have been the case when he began THE CONSUMMATA.
The notion that Morgan the Raider is a different character (presumably because I don’t know how to write him) is not unusual in Spillane or any writer, particularly when a little time between series entries has passed. Mike Hammer varies greatly between books, whenever a year or more has passed between their writing.
Again, I take no issue with your overall negative appraisal. You didn’t like it. Some do like it. That’s horse racing. But I object to these assumptions and assertions about who wrote what, and why I did what I did, which you have no way of knowing.
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MAC:
If I was wrong about you adding subplots, I apologize. It wasn’t actually guesswork, although it may have been a misreading. You’ve written similar things to what you wrote in your comment, “These are collaborations. I extend and shape the material — usually 100 to 125 double-spaced pages — to meet a length of around 300 such pages,” about this book specifically, if memory serves. I read “extended” to mean “inserted subplots” to extend the material. Sorry if I got that wrong, but it was a misinterpretation, not an assumption.
“I don’t think it’s asking too much for the novel to be taken on its own terms and not subjected to this guesswork, educated or not.”
If both your name and Spillane’s name are on the cover, it doesn’t seem right to get upset if someone tries to pick apart who wrote what. Every reader who has ever read a collaborative novel, humous or posthumous, by two writers he is familiar with does this. It isn’t a sin that I typed it out.
I don’t think there’s anything wrong with educated guesswork, and sometimes it wasn’t guesswork. There were times I could tell the sections you wrote. I could say why, but that would feel like going “A-ha!” when that wasn’t what I was going for at all. What I was trying to do (and obviously failed at, at least in your eyes) was to not be too harsh on you by pointing out that the book was probably beyond help based on the raw material and you had a tough job of it. That’s why I wrote, “I didn’t like most aspects of Collins’ ending, either, but, to be fair, I don’t think he had a whole lot to work with to get him to that point.”
“The notion that Morgan the Raider is a different character (presumably because I don’t know how to write him) is not unusual in Spillane or any writer, particularly when a little time between series entries has passed. Mike Hammer varies greatly between books, whenever a year or more has passed between their writing.”
This is something I contemplated writing about in this series of posts on Morgan the Raider. I deleted some material along those lines from both my review of The Consummata and the film of The Delta Factor. I considered a fourth post in the series discussing how my view of Morgan the Raider from The Delta Factor may have been significantly different from that of the author’s (or authors’), and why. (I didn’t, because Morgan’s not famous enough of a character that enough of my readers would know what I’m talking about. The default here would be Parker, of course, but Mike Hammer would also make a good subject for such a discussion.)
Where I take offense is your parenthetical “presumably because I don’t know how to write him,” in the above as if it was an insult from me to you. I didn’t presume that at all. That’s why I wrote: “I don’t know if that’s the fault of Spillane, Collins, or both.” From this reader’s perspective, Morgan the Raider in #2 was not Morgan the Raider from #1. I liked the one from #1 better, and I pointed that out to potential readers of the book who liked the Morgan from #1. Was I not supposed to do that?
I think my review was fair. I hate writing negative reviews, but I see my duty as giving consumer advice with reasons provided, and that’s what I tried to do.
No offense was meant. References to ‘Max Allan Collins’ posthumous completion’ would seem to lay the overall blame on me, but I have no argument with the negative review. You have every right to your opinion. My objection is what I consider to be the pointless excercise and weak reviewing technique of playing guessing games about who wrote (or plotted) what. Few reviewers have done that, for which I am grateful. Those who have, for all their confidence (“Aha!”), have been wrong more often than right. From my perspective, it’s a painfully fannish approach, but you are a fan site, so you are likely well within your bounds.
I frankly might not have written if “Craig” had not dismissed my work with Spillane on a basis of failed attempts like Robert B. Parker’s POODLE SPRING mishap, and not on its own terms.
I am a fan of your site and continue to be grateful for what you’ve done and are doing for “Richard Stark.”
All that said. The sad, honest truth is that POODLE SPRINGS was still one of Parker’s better books of his later years. PERCHANCE TO DREAM sucked on all levels.
I read The Delta Factor a few months ago and am about halfway through Consummata. I have to admit I liked the first book, but I am liking Consummata as much or even more. It would have been wonderful if Spillane had continued the series and we actually read about some of Morgan’s “raids”.
I have a soft spot for books with thieves/criminals as their main protagonists. And as interesting as the plots for the two published books are, I would love to see one where we get some background on Morgan (From Delta I caught a hint that he may be an orphan and not know who his parents are), what lead him to a life of “raiding” and an actual “raid” which we see him and his team conceive, plan and execute. I sense Max Allan Collins probably wouldn’t write a Morgan novel that wasn’t at least outlined by Spillane but if he ever does I hope he’d take the book in that direction.
Let us know what you think when you’re finished! One reason I linked Brian Drake’s review is because I thought that some readers might dissent.
If I thought my opinion was the be-all-and-end-all, I wouldn’t have invited on a co-blogger who frequently disagrees with me.
Definitely, Trent.
I just finished The Consummata, having had some free time this weekend. I’d already read The Delta Factor, and was looking forward to this second Morgan novel. Some parts of Consummata are a little hard to swallow, such as Morgan having some sort of precognition power that allows him to know he is in danger before bad stuff goes down.
This power allows him to stay away from a hotel room that is outfitted with a bomb; he also experiences this sensation when a Cuban assassin is laying in wait to kill him. The second thing that bugged me and seemed downright stupid is when Morgan has the bad guy tied up and on a boat and a second man who is supposed to be an ally suddenly shoots the bad guy. He then goes on to say this was because a sudden wave of anger came over him and basically it was an irresistible impulse. Morgan then mouths off about how now he knows the supposed ally was involved from the beginning with the main baddie and had to kill him (the villain) to silence him.
Why would Morgan do this, knowing the conspirator has a pistol and would now have to kill Morgan and his wife to stop them from telling anyone else this information? Wouldn’t the logical thing to do be to play along until they’re out of danger then spill the beans? This irked me.
But… The Consummata as a whole was a fun read. Max Allan Collins does an admirable job continuing the adventures of Morgan the Raider. In fact, Morgan has become my favorite Mickey Spillane creation, even surpassing Mike Hammer. MAC’s writing is easily distinguishable from Spillane’s. He adopted the tone and style well, but it’s still clearly a MAC book. Which isn’t a bad thing because MAC is a fine writer. And Consummata, as a direct sequel to Delta, does work. Morgan still seems like Morgan. I hope MAC writes further adventures of Morgan the Raider.